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Sae
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Could you check this e-mail that I typed to practice for my writing test? (Respond to an e-mail in ten minutes) Dear Ms. Graves, Thank you for your e-mail. I’m writing in regard to remodeling our office. I suggest that we change two pieces of furniture. One of these is our office desks. Some desks are unstable and have scratches on the surface. Another is our bookshelf because it is very old and not big enough to store our documents. Additionally, I would recommend installing the air conditioner in our office, as it is becoming cold recently. Regards, Tanaka
Aug 9, 2024 8:26 AM
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Could you check this e-mail that I typed to practice for my writing test? (Respond to an e-mail in ten minutes) Dear Ms. Graves, Thank you for your e-mail. I’m writing in regard to remodeling our office. I suggest that we change two types (two pieces would mean one desk and one bookshelf) of furniture. One of these is our office desks. Some desks are unstable and have scratches on the surface. Another is our bookshelf because it is very old and not big enough to store our documents. Additionally, I would recommend installing air conditioning in our office, as it is becoming too hot. Regards, Tanaka
Very well written. Air conditioning is for cooling. If you want to warm things up you install heating.
August 9, 2024
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