Yarenia
I would like to start saying a name of a person who I really admire, but it is difficult to find some one who has all the qualities to be an admirable person, however I think that always we can find or be a person worthy of admiration. I can mention some qualities like caring, patient, earnestness. People who feel fear of something but that doesn't mean that they can not overcome it and move on. A person who has a goal and he or she is welling to achieve it and never give up. A person who gives more value to the family and simple details of life than money. Those are a few qualities and others more that I haven't mentioned here that I admire in a person.
Dec 5, 2020 2:51 AM
Corrections · 4
I would like to start by saying a name of a person who I admire, but it is difficult to find someone who has all the qualities to be an admirable person, however, I think that always we can find or be a person worthy of admiration. I can mention some qualities like caring, patient, earnestness. People who feel fear of something but that doesn't mean that they can not overcome it and move on. A person who has a goal and or is willing to achieve it and never give up. A person who gives more value to the family and simple details of life than money. Those are a few qualities and others more that I haven't mentioned here that I admire in a person.
December 5, 2020
I would like to start saying a name of a person who I really admire, but it is difficult to find some one who has all the qualities to be an admirable person, however I think that always we can find or be a person worthy of admiration. I can mention some qualities like caring, patient, earnestness. People who feel fear of something but that doesn't mean that they can not overcome it and move on. A person who has a goal and he or she is welling to achieve it and never give up. A person who gives more value to the family and simple details of life than money. Those are a few qualities and others more that I haven't mentioned here that I admire in a person.
Yarina, I think short sentences will keep you away from punctuation and grammatical mistakes.
December 5, 2020
Want to progress faster?
Join this learning community and try out free exercises!