When I was a kid, I lived in a village. It was a memorable memories that I couldn't forget. The fresh air, the stream of the river, the Bird's chirping and the calm blowing breeze gave me the feeling

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Amie

When I was a kid, I lived in a village. It was a memorable memories that I couldn't forget. The fresh air, the stream of the river, the Bird's chirping and the calm blowing breeze gave me the feeling of solitude and tranquility. I used to run on causeway of paddy Field with my friends. Climbed the trees or jumped in the river was our daily activity. Sometimes, we bicycled down the hill and raced up to the nearest forest. Laughters could be heard from afar when one of us left behind. There were a question popping up in my mind, would I have that kind of freedom that I had when I was a child?

Aug 21, 2021 10:08 AM

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When I was a kid, I lived in a village. It was a memory that I won’t forget. The fresh air, the stream of the river, the birds chirping and the calm blowing breeze gave me the feeling of solitude and tranquility. I used to run on causeway of paddy field with my friends. Climbing the trees or jumping in the river were our daily activities. Sometimes we biked down the hill and raced up to the nearest forest. Laughters could be heard from afar when one of us was left behind. There was a question that popped up in my mind: would I still have that kind of freedom that I had when I was a child?

Great work! Beautiful imagery in the words. Just a note, most people say “biked” instead of “bicycled.”

September 15, 2021

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