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“About shopping”
Yesterday, I did shopping.
I often feel tired when I do shopping because I am not good at crowded places, big sounds and watching many colors.
So I always decide the time spending for shopping, and I am concentrating on shopping for that time.
I often feel tired after taking 2h, so I stop shopping.
Wandering around the city make me tired, but I need shopping. So it is important to find the best way for me.
Nov 15, 2020 8:54 AM
Corrections · 2
“About shopping” Yesterday, I did some shopping. I often feel tired when I
shop because I am not good in crowded places, with big sounds and many
colors. So I always decide the time I will spend on shopping, and I
concentrate on shopping for only that time. I often feel tired after 2h, so
I stop shopping then. Wandering around the city makes me tired, but I need to go shopping.
So it is important to find the best way to do so for me.
Great work :)
November 15, 2020
“About shopping” Yesterday, I went shopping. I often feel tired when I go
shopping because I am not good at crowded places, big sounds and being surrounded by many
colors. So I always decide how much time I’ll spend shopping, and I just
concentrate on shopping for that amount of time. I often feel tired after 2h or so, so
I stop shopping. Wandering around the city makes me tired, but I have to go shopping.
So it is important to find a way that works for me.
Have a nice day!
November 15, 2020
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Kako
Language Skills
English, Japanese
Learning Language
English
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