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Today after school I'm going to ShinOkubo to eat a lot of delicious food! So, I’m going to dress up more than usual!!
Jun 6, 2025 12:18 AM
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Today after school, I’m going to Shin-Okubo to eat lots of delicious food! So, I’m going to dress up more than usual!
Quick Tips: • “Shin-Okubo” → add a hyphen for correct place name formatting. • “Lots of delicious food” → “lots of” is more natural than “a lot of” in this kind of sentence. • “Dress up” → correct and natural — no change needed!
Jun 6, 2025 8:56 AM
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