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The bar chart illustrates the change in the number of the rural and urban’ s express deliver from 2018 to 2020.Specifically,the quantity of the urban’ s express deliver rose dramatically from 51 billion to 83 billion over the period from 2018 to 2020.In stark contrast,the rural ‘s express deliver increased slowly/gently from 12 billion to 30 billion during the same period/over the 3 years. The bar chart illustrates the change in the number of the rural and urban’ s express deliver from 2018 to 2020.Specifically,the number of the urban and rural’ s express deliver increased by 32 billion and 18 billion,respectively.It is clearly shows that the urban’ s express deliver rose faster than rural’ s. The primary reason lies in the phenomenon that economy development of the city is much better than country.First,most citizens’ s salary is more than country’s people.Thus,they have more money to shop online.Second,citizen’ s awareness of shopping online is in common in the modern society.Citizens are busy with work,so they prefer to choose online shipping to save time. Although,country ‘s economy develops slower than city’s.It still shows an upward trend.Chinese government has fund money to foster its development.Such as transport construction,manual factories.So country’s express deliver rose gently from 2018 to 2020. In my understanding,it is essential to pay attention to and take action on countryside’s economic growth.This will offer more job opportunity to rural area and mitigate the population of city.I deeply believe that if our government do our utmost,China will have a promising prospect.
Dec 19, 2023 2:59 AM
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The bar chart illustrates the change in the number of express delivery items in rural and urban areas from 2018 to 2020. Specifically, the quantity of the urban’ s express deliveries rose dramatically from 51 billion to 83 billion over the period in question. In stark contrast, express deliveries in rural areas increased gradually from 12 billion to 30 billion during the same period/over the 3 years. (You have got the wrong way around. Rural deliveries more than doubled) The bar chart illustrates the change in the number of the rural and urban’ s express deliver from 2018 to 2020.Specifically,the number of the urban and rural’ s express deliver increased by 32 billion and 18 billion,respectively.It is clearly shows that the urban’ s express deliver rose faster than rural’ s. (Why are you saying the same thing again?) The primary reason lies in the phenomenon that the economic (economic is an adj) development of the city is much better than in the countryside. First, most city dwellers’ salaries are higher than those for countryside people. Thus, they have more money to shop online. Second, citizen’ s awareness of shopping online is in common in modern society. Citizens are busy with work, so they prefer to choose online shipping to save time. Although, the countryside’s economy develops slower than the city’s, it still showed an upward trend. The Chinese government has allocated money to foster its development. Such as transport construction and manual factories. So the countryside’s express deliveries rose steadily from 2018 to 2020. In my opinion, it is essential to pay attention to and take action on the countryside’s economic growth. This will offer more job opportunities to rural areas and mitigate the population of cities. I deeply believe that if our government does its utmost, China will have a promising future.
This is too repetitive. Also, you have misunderstood the graph. It shows deliveries increasing faster in the countryside than in cities. Note, while one definition of a ‘citizen’ is a city dweller, it more usually a person from a certain country. You are a citizen of China, I am a citizen of the UK - wherever we are currently living.
December 19, 2023
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