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I watched biographical movies of Bill Gates and Mark Zuckerberg many years ago. And, an impression I received from them is that incredible people like Bill and Zuckerburg are inquisitive about something and dedicated to it like they are engrossed in it when they are young.
Nov 16, 2022 6:25 AM
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I watched biographical movies about Bill Gates and Mark Zuckerberg many years ago. The impression I got from them is that incredible people like Bill and Zuckerburg are inquisitive about something and dedicated to it, and engrossed in it when they are young.
THe impression I received from THEM -- unclear if "them" refers to the people or the film
You can clarify by just saying "The impression I got was that incredible people..."
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The impression I got from the films is...
The impression I got from listening to these men is...
November 16, 2022
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I watched the biographical movies of Bill Gates and Mark Zuckerberg many years ago. And, an impression I got from them is that incredible people like Bill and Zuckerburg were inquisitive about something and dedicated until they were engrossed in it when they were young.
I thought this was a much better rendering
November 16, 2022
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