Once I came across a little fox on the mountain. He seemed to me shy and cautious but curious and intelligent as well. We were staring at each other for a while and after a minute he left, looking bac

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Agustín

Once I came across a little fox on the mountain. He seemed to me shy and cautious but curious and intelligent as well. We were staring at each other for a while and after a minute he left, looking back at me from time to time. This lasted for a long time and finally he vanished into the forest. I don’t really now if that fox was male or female, but no doubt was stunning. Remembering that brief encounter If I could choose any animal to be I would pick a subtle and cunning little fox.

Nov 27, 2022 1:07 AM

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Once I came across a little fox on the mountain. He seemed to me shy and cautious but curious and intelligent as well. We were staring at each other for a while and after a minute he left, looking back at me from time to time. This lasted for a long time and finally he vanished into the forest. I don’t really know if that fox was male or female, but no it doubt was stunning. Remembering that brief encounter, if I could choose any animal to be, I would pick a subtle and cunning little fox.

Very good text! I just added a couple of very small corrections. Thank you for responding to my question. :-)

November 27, 2022

Once I came across a little fox on the mountain. He seemed to me shy and cautious but curious and intelligent as well. We were staring at each other for a while and after a minute he left, looking back at me from time to time. This lasted for a long time and finally he vanished into the forest. I don’t really know if that fox was male or female, but there is no doubt that it was stunning. Remembering that brief encounter, if I could choose any animal to be, I would pick a subtle and cunning little fox.

Your writing is very good. Usually I am deleting unnecessary words, but here, for a change, I am adding them! In the second sentence I keep "doubt" but I think prefer just saying "but it was stunning". or "it was stunning nonetheless". I hope that helps.

November 27, 2022

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