Please, help. What mistakes are in the text? Dear Mr. Collins, There are some challenges. I find it's difficult to do my job. I work in an open-plan office
which I share with colleagues'numbers, but the open-plan office always puts me in hot water.
I can't concentrate on my work because there is background noise created by my colleagues. There are chatting, ringing, slamming between doors and others. I don't hear my own thoughts in this chaos. It's pressure on me. I need to
repeat questions to my clients, and eventually they don't hear me. however, I have a
solution how to fix that problem. I think it would be better if I worked at home where I could pull weight to reach the company's goals without effort. What do you
think of a remote job for me?