Is this correct? well written? I dedicate this thesis to my family, friends and professors who during the carrying out of this research gave me a word of support.

Claudia

Apr 17, 2024 4:40 PM

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Is this correct? well written? I dedicate this thesis to my family, friends and professors who, during my research, supported and encouraged me.

Apr 18, 2024 6:02 AM

Is this correct? well written? I dedicate this thesis to my family, friends and professors who, during the course of this research provided encouragement and support.

Apr 17, 2024 7:18 PM

Is this correct? well written? I dedicate this thesis to my family, friends and professors who during the carrying out of this research gave me a word of support.

The last part of the sentence is not very idiomatic. I would word it something like "...who supported me during this research", "....who supported me while I carried out this research", or something like "....who offered me words of support while I carried out this research". Congrats on your thesis!

Apr 17, 2024 6:15 PM

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