I have two sisters, one of them is elder than me so I didn't play with her therefore I will not be able say anything that is soo annoying. While the other one is smaller than me and there isn't a big

Saddam Hussain

I have two sisters, one of them is elder than me so I didn't play with her therefore I will not be able say anything that is soo annoying. While the other one is smaller than me and there isn't a big age difference, we played together a lot, and there are so many annoying things that she did to me. One of them was reporting, she was quite clever and had very good skills of proving her self innocent to our parents and make me responsible for everything.

Apr 19, 2024 6:16 PM

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I have two sisters, one of them is older than me, so I didn't play with her often. For this reason, I am not able to say anything that is so annoying. On the other hand, the other one is younger than me and there isn't a big age difference, so we played together a lot, and there are a lot of annoying things that she did to me. One of them was being a tattle tale. She was quite clever and very good at proving her innocence to our parents and making me responsible for everything.

Overall great job, I just changed some minor things to make it sound more native-like. Some things are just a question of writing style, for example I assumed that by "reporting" you meant when your sister would tell your parents bad things that you did, and we have the expression of being a "tattle tale" for this. I hope that helps!

Apr 19, 2024 6:51 PM

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