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Describe your ideal vacation. Where would you go? What would you do? Where would you stay? As far as I am concerned, an ideal vacation means spending time with family without worrying about anything. Unlike some young people, I prefer to go to a vacation with my family rather than go to a vacation with my friends. Going to the countryside for a week is very appropriate because I am usually so busy and allocating too much time for a vacation is impossible. In Iran, there are various beautiful places to visit in rural areas. In northern Iran, there is a beach with a lot of comfortable villas and hotels which you can rent for different periods of time. We could do various interesting activities during the vacation. My father and I could swim there if we would travel there at summer. I love swimming at sea, and also, I can lie on the beach for sunning myself. My family members tend to get up late in the morning; in contrast, I like get up early and watch the sky before the sun rises. It is not only enjoyable but also appropriate to read my favorite book in the morning. Next, we can cook together and have a great lunch. In the afternoon, we could play a game or sport if the weather would be nice. Spending time with my family backs me to my childhood. For that reason, I like to spend time with them. Also, there is no guarantee that none of us would be healthy or alive in the future. I prefer to value my family rather than any person else. On the other hand, it is neither important nor immature to worry about an expensive hotel for having an accommodation during the vacation; however, a number of people often imagine renting a luxury hotel or traveling by an expensive tour for an ideal vacation.
May 1, 2021 12:21 PM
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Describe your ideal vacation. Where would you go? What would you do? Where would you stay? As far as I am concerned, an ideal vacation means spending time with family without worrying about anything (you could also say "without a care in the world"). Unlike some young people, I prefer going on vacation with my family rather than with my friends. Going to the countryside for a week is perfect because I am usually so busy and allocating so much time for a vacation is impossible. In Iran, there are various beautiful places to visit in rural areas. In northern Iran, there is a beach with a lot of comfortable villas and hotels which you can rent for different periods of time. There are various interesting activities for us to do during the vacation. My father and I could swim there if we travelled there in summer. I love swimming in the sea, and also, I'd be able lie on the beach and sunbathe. My family members tend to get up late in the morning; in contrast, I like get up early and watch the sky before the sun rises (you could also say: my family tends to prefer to lie in unlike me who loves getting up early in time to see the sky before the sun rises). It is not only enjoyable but also the perfect time to read my favorite book in the morning. Next, we would cook together and have a delicious lunch. In the afternoon, we could play a game or sport if the weather was nice. Spending time with my family takes me back to my childhood. For that reason, I like to spend time with them (Does it mean them mean on holiday or with your family?). Also, there is no guarantee that any of us will be healthy or alive in the future. I prefer to value my family rather than any person else. On the other hand, it is neither important nor immature (?) to worry about staying in an expensive hotel during the vacation. However, a number of people often imagine booking into a luxury hotel or going on an expensive tour for an ideal vacation.
Great piece of writing! Very very interesting to learn about what you can do in rural Iran and I liked the detail you went into when describing why you prefer to go on holiday with your family. You used a great range of phrases and language For your next piece of writing I reccomend that you have a little look over the 2nd conditional 😊
May 2, 2021
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