Yesterday I had a work in the morning and I went out to have a lunch with my friend after that. We had some Mexican food and it was nice. We haven’t seen each other since last year so we talked a lot

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Nanako

Yesterday I had a work in the morning and I went out to have a lunch with my friend after that. We had some Mexican food and it was nice. We haven’t seen each other since last year so we talked a lot . We mainly talked about our future plans. My friend wants to be a designer so now she has been doing very hard work for it. I got a so much motivation from her yesterday. It was so good day yesterday. Could anyone correct this sentence more natural please?

May 3, 2021 3:26 AM

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Hi Nanako 🙋🏻‍♂️ I’m Batuhan and I love Japanese and Japanese culture very much. I want to go to Japan when as soon as possible. Will you be friends with me ? By the way me to learning to English. I can help you that this subject. It is enough for us to be friends. You can write to under this paragraph ❤️👋🏻

May 5, 2021

Yesterday, I had work to do in the morning and went out to have lunch with my friend after that. We had some Mexican food and it was nice. We haven’t seen each other since last year, so we talked a lot. We mainly talked about our future plans. My friend wants to be a designer so now she is working hard for it. I was highly motivated by her yesterday. Yesterday was such a good day! Could anyone correct this sentence more natural please?

You can also say "i have a job/task to do" but work is uncountable noun. Peace!

May 3, 2021

Yesterday I went to work in the morning. After I had lunch with my friend. We had some Mexican food and it was nice. We haven’t seen each other since last year so we talked a lot . We mainly talked about our future plans. My friend wants to be a designer so now she has been working very hard work. She motivated me a lot. Yesterday was a great day.

Hi Nanako! I made some minor changes to make it sound more natural. 🙂 great job though! Glad you had a great day.

May 3, 2021

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