Today when I was driving home, I saw a man run a light on the cross road while he was holding a little girl and staring at his phone. It’s unbelievable how dangerous this is. I admire his courage…

Joy

Jan 8, 2024 10:03 AM

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Today, when I was driving home, I saw a man run a red light while holding a little girl and staring at his phone. It’s unbelievable how dangerous this is. I admire his courage…

Some courage to admire, for sure! 😆 You wrote this well, Joy, nice job. My corrections are minor, for clarity & fluency. I hope it helps!

January 8, 2024

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