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INFORMAL EMAIL
“WHAT A GREAT SURPRISE, UNCLE TOM”
From: Antonio
To: Tom
Subject: Birthday Present
How are things? Great to hear from you, Sorry I haven’t written, but I’ve been busy. I want to tell you how grateful I am. Let me tell you about it.
First of all, I love that motorbike, this is exactly what I want. At the beginning I thought that the gift would be another gigantic dog just like, when I was a child, but you really surprised me with that. The sender was lost and arrived a bit later so I received it one month later.
Although, the present really liked me, I would prefer a car, but it is well. You know that I love animals, but you gift me one all years and I’m tired of dogs so, for the next birthday why won’t you present me a car, I would like very very much.
Write soon, I can’t wait to your next present.
All the best,
May 24, 2021 10:09 PM
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INFORMAL EMAIL “WHAT A GREAT SURPRISE, UNCLE TOM” From: Antonio To: Tom Subject:
Birthday Present How are things? Great to hear from you! Sorry I haven’t
written, but I’ve been busy. I want to tell you how grateful I am for your gift.
First of all, I love the motorbike - it is exactly what I wanted!
At first, I thought the gift would be another gigantic dog, just
like when I was a child, but you really surprised me. The delivery person got
lost, so I received it one month late. Although I really like the present, I would prefer a car, but it’s okay. You know that I
love animals, but you give me one every year and I’m tired of dogs so, for the
next birthday, why don’t you send me a car? I would like it very, very much. Write
soon! I can’t wait for your next present. All the best,
May 26, 2021
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INFORMAL EMAIL
“WHAT A GREAT SURPRISE, UNCLE TOM”
From: Antonio
To: Tom
Subject: Birthday Present
How are things? Great to hear from you. Sorry I haven’t written, but I’ve been busy. I want to tell you how grateful I am. Let me tell you about it.
First of all, I love the motorbike, it is exactly what I wanted. At first I thought that it would be another gigantic dog like when I was a child, but you really surprised me with this gift. The sender was lost and arrived a bit late, so I received it a month late.
Although I really liked the present, I would have preferred a car, but it's alright. You know that I love animals, but you give me one every year and I’m tired of dogs. So for my next birthday, why don’t you give me a car? I would like very very much.
Write soon, I can’t wait for your next present.
All the best,
(Your name here)
May 24, 2021
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