Maria Demchenkova
Our life is getting crazy, we are constantly busy at work and with work..., nevertheless people may feel loneless, but as they do not have much time to be involve in some outdoor activities, they try to find a way to solve the problem, therefore it is no wonder that they find the solution making friends online... Probably they don't need any real friends, but just some people to get together...
Oct 25, 2021 7:35 PM
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Our life is getting crazy and we are constantly busy at work, and with work. People may feel lonely, but as they do not have much time to be involved outdoor activities, they try to solve the problem. Due to to their limited time available, therefore it is no wonder that people try to find the solution by making friends online. Possibly they they don't need any real friends, but just some people to get together with.
Hi there! Here is my view of the paragraph, making it a bit more concise. :-) Hope you are having a great day.
October 25, 2021
Our life goes crazy, we are constantly busy at work and at work ... however, people may feel lonely, but since they don't have much time to get involved in some outdoor activities, they try to find a way to solve the problem, so it's no wonder they find the solution to make friends online ... They probably don't need real friends, just a few people to reunite ...
October 25, 2021
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