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A lovely hobby
My favorite hobby is watching movies.
I usually watch a movie daily if I have spare time.
Watching movies really makes me feel so joyful and relaxed.
I started watching movies when I was a child. I remember that my parents always brought me to the cinema every Sunday. The movie that most impressed me is an animated movie called 'Mulan'.
I love it so much, and it was quite interesting and fun. That's why I fell in love with movie.
Besides that, movies have also given me so much knowledge and experience that I wouldn't have otherwise. They sometimes lift me up when I'm upset too.
In conclusion, I think I'll keep this hobby until I'm old. I can't imagine my life without movies.
please check my grammar,thank you.
Sep 10, 2023 10:52 AM
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A lovely hobby
My favorite hobby is watching movies. I usually watch a movie daily if I have spare time.
Watching movies really makes me feel so joyful and relaxed.
I started watching movies when I was a child. I remember that my parents always took me to the cinema every Sunday. The movie that most impressed me was an animated movie called 'Mulan'. I loved it so much, and it was quite interesting and fun. That's why I fell in love with movies.
Besides that, movies have also given me so much knowledge and experience that I wouldn't have otherwise. They sometimes lift me up when I'm upset too.
In conclusion, I think I'll keep this hobby until I'm old. I can't imagine my life without movies.
Excellent! :-)
September 11, 2023
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A lovely hobby My favorite hobby is watching movies. I usually watch a movie
daily if I have spare time. Watching movies really makes me feel so joyful and
relaxed. I started watching movies when I was a child. I remember that my
parents always brought me to the cinema every Sunday. The movie that has most
impressed me is an animated movie called 'Mulan'. I love it so much. It is
quite interesting and fun and That’s why I fell in love with the movie. Besides that,
movies have also given me so much knowledge and experience that I wouldn't have
otherwise. They sometimes lift me up when I'm upset too. In conclusion, I think
I'll keep this hobby until I'm old. I can't imagine my life without movies.
please check my grammar,thank you.
September 12, 2023
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alice🌻🌻
Language Skills
Chinese (Mandarin), English
Learning Language
English
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