When you are going to visit other country for the first time, it is important to know some items about culture of this country before. It’ll take some time to explore it, but you’ll keep out of confus

Alyona

When you are going to visit other country for the first time, it is important to know some items about culture of this country before. It’ll take some time to explore it, but you’ll keep out of confusing situations. There tends to be the strikes on the railways in Italy, for example. So there might be a problem if you buy a ticket that day. Although it pays to book tickets in advance, you should be careful and look at website which has information about the strikes. There being a clear diet in time in Italy, most restaurants open only in particular hours. I think it could upset you to come to the closed doors when you are hungry. It was only a couple of examples. There are a lot of details that you should know before your journey. And if you’ll spend your time to prepare for it, it won’t worry you that something unpleasant will happen.

Jun 18, 2021 10:12 PM

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When you are going to visit another country for the first time, it is important to know the country's cultural items before. You’ll take some time to realize it, but it’ll keep you away from confusing situations. There are usually strikes at the railways, in Italy, for example. So, you may have a problem if you buy a ticket in these days. Booking tickets in advance is paid, therefore, you should be careful and search for websites that have information about the strikes. There are a clear time for eating in Italy. Most of the restaurants open only at specific hours. I think to find closed doors when you are hungry may upset you. These were only a couple of examples. There are a lot of details that you should know before your journey. If you spend your time preparing yourself for it, you won’t need to worry about anything unpleasant to happen.

June 19, 2021

If you are about to visit a foreign country for the first time, it is important to know some things about the culture of the place before. It’ll take some time to explore it, but it will keep you out of confusing situations. For example, there tends to be strikes on the railways in Italy. It might be a problem if you buy a ticket on this particular day. Although, if you paid to book tickets in advance, you should be careful and take a look at a website which has information about the strikes. In addition to that, there is a quirk where restaurants open only in particular hours. I think it could upset you, once you'd be hungry facing the restaurant's doors closed. It was just a couple examples. There are a lot of details that you should know before your journey. Therefore, if you’ll spend time in order to prepare yourself for it, the odds of something unpleasant happening are way smaller.

Nice text with a neat organization of paragraphs! The content is very useful too.✨ My thoughts over your text is that it is pretty good, but with a couple things that need to be fixed, amongst them: lack of clarity in the construction of some sentences and lack of connectives. The first one I mean is when you are not so clear about what you want to say, like in “There being a clear diet in time in Italy”. I had to reread it a couple times to get what you mean (and I’m not sure if I did it). Things like that made me change some sentences almost entirely (sorry if I turned something differently from what you meant 😅). Therefore, my advice to fix this is to study the correct structure of English sentences, you will end up finding out a lot of useful things that you didn’t know so far. A simple Google search will teach you a lot. Now about the connectives, they make all the difference when you are writing a text. They tie ideas together, making your text look more cohesive. I put some connectives like: For example, in addition to that, therefore... They are amazing. You can find more connectives searching for that on Google too. I hope it helps you in some way. Keep it up 🥂

June 19, 2021

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