Tatyana Bolotova
Hi, everybody! My task today is writing the review of a cafe. I'm trying not to use the translator that's why can be a lot of mistakes. Sorry. And I bet you fix them, I'm right? Ok, let's start. I would like to tell you about the restaurant in the hotel in Frankfurt where I was by my job. It was a very cozy small restaurant where the staff knows each person who lives in that hotel. Of course, I forgot how this restaurant was called. It was approximately 7 years ago. But I remember the barmen who offered the meals and the drinks: he was very cute and kind, and friendly. There are 10 tables were there or a bit more. I liked very much the white clean tablecloths on the tables. The music was not too loud. The service was excellent. The atmosphere was warm and lively. There are a lot of flowers, and bright morning light throws the clean windows. We with my colleges had breakfast there and then we went to the Exhibition. The meal was very tasty and fresh, and diverse. There are eggs, milk, sausages, a various loaf of bread, porridge, and omelet, and cheese - it was the food famous for the Russian peoples. Coffee and tea, and juices too. We lived in this Hotel and the breakfasts were included. That's why I don't know the price. This hotel was not far from the exhibition and the peoples who lived and ate in this restaurant were from different countries: from Italy, from Germany, from Russia. I was abroad the first time. And I didn't know English at all. It was so interesting to hear the people from different countries. I definitely go back to this restaurant if I could another time. Pros: only pluses. Cons: no one. Overall opinion: it's the greatest restaurant and I enjoyed the meal and friendly atmosphere. And I show you one from my illustrations, take a look, please. It's the seamless pattern that I created for the kitchen's wallpapers. Do you like it?
Jun 13, 2021 1:53 PM
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Hi, everybody! My task today is writing a review for a cafe. I'm trying not to use a translator that's why there might be a lot of mistakes. Sorry. And I bet you'll fix them, I'm right? Ok, let's start. I would like to tell you about the restaurant in the hotel in Frankfurt where I was for my job. It was a very cozy, small restaurant where the staff knows each person who stays in that hotel. Of course, I forgot what this restaurant was called. It was approximately 7 years ago, but I remember the barman who offered the meals and the drinks: he was very cute, kind, and friendly. There were 10 tables or a bit more. I really liked the clean, white tablecloths on the tables. The music was not too loud. The service was excellent. The atmosphere was warm and lively. There were a lot of flowers, and bright, morning light shines through the clean windows. My colleagues had breakfast with me there and then we went to the Exhibition. The meal was very tasty and fresh, and diverse. There were eggs, milk, sausages, various loaves of bread, porridge, omelette, and cheese - it was the food made famous by the Russian people. To drink there was coffee, tea, and juices too. We stayed at this hotel and breakfast was included, that's why I don't know the price. This hotel was not far from the exhibition and the people who stayed and ate in this restaurant were from different countries: Italy, Germany and Russia. I was abroad for the first time and I didn't know English at all. It was so interesting to hear people from different countries. I would definitely go back to this restaurant if I could another time. Pros: only pluses. Cons: not one. Overall opinion: it's the greatest restaurant and I enjoyed the meal and friendly atmosphere. And I show you one of my illustrations; take a look, please. It's the seamless pattern that I created for the kitchen's wallpapers. Do you like it?
Privet Tatyana. You write really well! Note "the" is for something specific; "a" is not specific - in this case your review might be one of many. Café should really have the mark over the "e", as it is a French word, but don't worry about it too much. "Lives" forever, in the hotel??? Here is an interesting situation, where staff can be singular - thinking of it as a group, or plural, if you think of them as a number of people. Adjective order can be very complicated, but in general it is easiest to think of the most subjective one first, (which depends on your opinion), down to the most objective - something you can't question. For example, I am a handsome Australian man. My wife is the only one who calls me handsome, but nobody can question that I was born in Australia. "Omelette" is another French word! Keep practicing! Simon. (I like your drawing.)
June 13, 2021
Hi everyone! My task today is writing the review of a cafe. I'm trying to not using the translator, that's why there will be a lot of mistakes. Sorry. And I bet you'll fix them, right? Ok, let's start. I would like to tell you about a restaurant in the hotel in Frankfurt where I was there for my job. It was a very cozy small restaurant where the staff know each person who lives in that hotel. Of course, I forgot how this restaurant was called. It was approximately 7 years ago. But I remember the bartender who offered meals and drinks: he was very cute, kind, and friendly. There were 10 tables or more there. I liked very much the white clean tablecloths on the tables. The music was not too loud. The service was excellent. The atmosphere was warm and lively. There were a lot of flowers and bright morning light throws the clean windows. Me and my colleges had breakfast there and we went to the exhibition. The meal was very tasty, fresh, and diverse. There were eggs, milk, sausages, a various loaf of bread, porridge, omelette, and cheese - it was the famous food for Russian people. Coffee, tea, and juices too. We lived in this hotel and the breakfast was included. That's why I don't know the price. This hotel was not far from the exhibition and the people who lived and ate in this restaurant were from different countries: from Italy, Germany, to Russia. It was the first time I went abroad, and I didn't know English at all. It was so interesting to hear the people from different countries. I will definitely go back to this restaurant if I could another time. Pros: only plus. Cons: nothing Overall opinion: it's the greatest restaurant and I enjoyed the meal and friendly atmosphere. And I show you one from my illustrations, take a look, please. It's the seamless pattern that I created for the kitchen's wallpapers. Do you like it?
Your writing is good Tatyana, you just need to pay attention to the tenses and how to use plural/singular noun. Keep up the good work 👍
October 22, 2021
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