Fateme
1.I'm an introvert girl. So I don't have lots of friends and I just have 3 close friends. 2.I fill my freetime with reading books. My favourite writer is Murakami and I really enjoy the mysterious atmosphere in his books. 3.I don't like seafood! From the childhood until now, I've not eaten any seafood. Although I know these foods are very healthy and necessary for body but I can't eat them. :/ 4.I enjoy doing puzzle. One of my favourite pastime is doing puzzle. The last puzzle I did , had 2000 parts. 5. I love noodle. As I hate seafood I love noodle. 6. I like learning new languages. I want start learning Japanese soon parallel with improve my English skills. 7.I'm a messy girl . I have lots of problems with doing thing on time so I usually can't do my assignment on its due time. So recently I make a to do list and use planner to be more regular. 8.I like oversize clothes. Just because they are so comfortable. 9.my favourite series character is Sherlock Holmes. I have crush on him since I was 16. 10. I love ocean. Because of pandemic we can't travel safely so it is a long time I've not seen ocean. I hope this disease is over and all the people in the world back to their Normal life .
Jun 14, 2021 4:32 PM
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1.I'm an introvert. So I don't have lots of friends and I just have 3 close friends. 2.I fill my freetime with reading books. My favourite writer is Murakami and I really enjoy the mysterious atmosphere in his books. 3.I don't like seafood! Since childhood until now, I've not eaten any seafood. Although I know these foods are very healthy and necessary for body I can't eat them. :/ 4.I enjoy doing puzzles. One of my favourite pastimes is doing puzzles. The last puzzle I did , had 2000 parts. 5. I love noodles. As much as I hate seafood, I love noodles. 6. I like learning new languages. I want to start learning Japanese soon, at the same time improve my English skills. 7.I'm a messy girl . I have lots of problems with doing things on time so I usually can't do my assignments on its due time. So recently I've been making a to do list and use a planner to be more regular. 8.I like oversized clothes. Just because they are so comfortable. 9.my favourite series character is Sherlock Holmes. I have had a crush on him since I was 16. 10. I love the ocean. Because of the pandemic we can't travel safely so it has been a long time since I saw the ocean. I hope this disease will be over and all the people in the world can go back to their Normal lives .
Great text! and very interesting. My tip for you on what to improve next in your English: 1. the usage of a/an/the and singular and plural nouns. 2. the present perfect tense
June 14, 2021
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1.I'm an introvert. So I don't have lots of friends and I just have 3 close friends. 2.I fill my freetime with reading books. My favourite writer is Murakami and I really enjoy the mysterious atmosphere in his books. 3.I don't like seafood! From my childhood up until now, I've never eaten any seafood. Even though I know these foods are very healthy and necessary for the body, I can't eat them. :/ 4.I enjoy doing puzzles. One of my favourite pastimes is doing puzzles. The last puzzle I did had 2000 pieces. 5. I love noodles. I love noodles as much as I hate seafood. 6. I like learning new languages. I want to start learning Japanese soon while also improving my English skills. 7.I'm a messy girl . I have lots of problems with doing things on time so I usually can't do my assignments on time. So recently I made a to do list and use a planner to be more regular. 8.I like oversize clothes. Just because they are so comfortable. 9.My favourite series character is Sherlock Holmes. I have had a crush on him since I was 16. 10. I love the ocean. Because of the pandemic we can't travel safely so it is a long time since I've seen the ocean. I hope this disease is over soon and everyone in the world can go back to their normal life .
Great work!
June 14, 2021
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