Maria Flores
What do you think about this writing? (part 2) It is inexplicable what I felt when she told me. I had the feeling that it was my fault, that it was all my fault. I completely fainted. But then I understood who the real culprit was. I knew Oliver was arrogant, narcissistic, selfish, and idiotic, but I never believed that he would be the murderer of my ex-wife. Hearing that Gillian had committed suicide because of the unhappiness of her marriage, a fury grew immensely over me. I got Mme Wyatt to tell me where they lived and headed there. I banged on the door incessantly until he opened it. There it was him, Oliver, with his stupid victim face. I pounced on him and started hitting him in anger so that my fists started bleeding. "You! You killed her son of a bit**! She chose you! You just had to make her happy! " When I woke up from the trance of rage in which I had succumbed, the neighbors had already called the police, and I realized what I had done. No, I don't regret killing Oliver. But what I'll never forgive myself for is making him and Gillian meet.
Jun 14, 2021 9:28 PM
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What do you think about this writing? (part 2) It is inexplicable what I felt when she told me. I had the feeling that it was my fault, that it was all my fault. I completely fainted. But then I understood who the real culprit was. I knew Oliver was arrogant, narcissistic, selfish, and idiotic, but I never believed that he would be the my ex-wife’s murderer. Hearing that Gillian had committed suicide because of the unhappiness in her marriage, a fury grew immensely over me. I got M.me Wyatt to tell me where they lived and headed there. I banged on the door incessantly until he opened it. There he was, Oliver, with his stupid victim face. I pounced on him and started hitting him in anger until my fists started bleeding. "You! You killed her you son of a bit**! She chose you! You just had to make her happy! " When I woke up from the trance of rage to which I had succumbed, the neighbors had already called the police, and I realized what I had done. No, I don't regret killing Oliver. But what I'll never forgive myself for is making him and Gillian meet.
Very dark story...
June 14, 2021
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What do you think about this writing? (part 2) It is inexplicable what I felt when she told me. I had the feeling that it was my fault, that it was all my fault. I completely fainted but then I understood who the real culprit was. I knew Oliver was arrogant, narcissistic, selfish, and idiotic, but I never believed that he would be the murderer of my ex-wife. Hearing that Gillian had committed suicide because of the unhappiness of her marriage, a fury grew immensely over me. I got Mme Wyatt to tell me where they lived and headed there. I banged on the door incessantly until he opened it. There it was him, Oliver, with his stupid victim face. I pounced on him and started hitting him in anger so that my fists started bleeding. "You! You killed her son of a bit**! She chose you! You just had to make her happy! " When I woke up from the trance of rage in which I had succumbed, the neighbors had already called the police, and I realized what I had done. No, I don't regret killing Oliver. But what I'll never forgive myself for is making him and Gillian meet.
Excellent!
June 14, 2021
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