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For me, we chat is my most important app now. Cause I have to use it to connect some of my friends who are not near me. Also, I have some foreign friends who have we chat need to be connected.
Jun 15, 2021 11:21 AM
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For me, wechat is my most important app now. Cause I have to use it to connect with some of my friends who are not near me. Also, I have some foreign friends who have wechat and need to be connected.
June 15, 2021
For me, WeChat is currently the most important app on my phone because I have to use it to connect with some of my friends who are not near me. Also, I have some foreign friends who have WeChat need to be connected.
Good attempt! I changed some of the wording in your first sentence for further clarity. Regarding "and need to be connected" — this also needs clarification. I'm not sure if your foreign friends need to be connected in general. Or do you need to connect with them for some reason? Whatever the reason, it is not clearly stated in writing. Good luck with your language learning journey!
June 15, 2021
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