Noelia De Leonardis
Hello everybody. I'm catlover from I was a child, I have serveral cats in my life. Now I have a cat called: "Chupacabrín" is very very particular, and my favorite moment is when in the night came to my bed to "ronronearme" to my ear. Regards from Argentina
Jun 15, 2021 12:21 PM
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Hello everybody. I have been a cat lover since I was a child; I have had several cats in my life. Now, I have a cat called Chupacabrín, who is very particular. My favorite moment is when, in the night, he/she comes to my bed to purr in my ear. Regards from Argentina
June 15, 2021
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Hello everybody. I'm a cat lover since I was a child. I have had several cats in my life. Now I have a cat called/named "Chupacabrín" who is very, very particular. My favorite moment is when, in the night, they came to my bed to "ronronearme"/purr in my ear. Regards from Argentina
Be mindful of "run-on sentences". These are sentences that are too long and need to be broken up. Because "ronronearme" is in quotes, it's hard to know if that is a word you don't know the English translation for or if it is a description of the sound the cat makes. Also, in the last sentence I used the pronoun "they" for your cat because I don't know the cat's gender. You can replace with "he" or "she". Same sentence, you would use "came" if this was an incident you are recalling from the past, but you would use "comes" if it is an incident that happens often.
June 15, 2021
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Hello everybody. I've been catlover since I was a child. I have serveral cats in my life. Now I have a cat called "Chupacabrín". It is very very particular, and my favorite moment is when in the night it comes to my bed to "ronronearme" in my ear. Regards from Argentina
Nicely done! Your English writing is very good. You only need a few small gramatical changes. 🙂
June 15, 2021
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Hello everybody. I'm catlover since I was a child, I have serveral cats in my life. Now I have a cat called: "Chupacabrín" is very very particular, and my favorite moment is when in the night came to my bed to "ronronearme" to my ear. Regards from Argentina
June 15, 2021
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