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Hello, everyone!
I went to Disney Sea with my college friends.
It was supposed to rain today, but it didn't.
So, we had a great time. There were less people so, we could ride a lot of attractions. We especially rode the roller coaster many times. I walked a lot today and I was very tired. But I had a great time and I want to go there again!
If I made any mistakes, please correct them.
Jun 16, 2021 1:28 PM
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Hello, everyone!
I went to Disney Sea with my college friends.
It was supposed to rain today, but it didn't.
So, we had a great time. There were less people so, we could ride a lot of attractions. We especially rode the rollercoaster many times. I walked a lot today and I was very tired. But I had a great time and I want to go there again!
If I made any mistakes, please correct them.
Almost no mistakes, which is amazing; well done! I hope you get to go to Disney Sea again soon :)
June 16, 2021
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