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I grew up eating rice. Rice is stable food of my place. People here eat rice in every meal. Without rice it is incomplete for us. So I love to eat rice as its make our health strong. My favourite food to eat is rice. Wherever I go I prefer eating rice. As far as I concern rice is good for health as well.
Thank you everyone for reading my aweful writing. Please consider correcting it. If you could kind enough to do that. I'll be very grateful to you. Thanks a million.
Nov 8, 2020 3:28 PM
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I grew up eating rice, which is a staple where I am from. People here eat rice with every meal, and without it, the meal seems incomplete to us. In fact, my favourite food to eat is rice, and I also love to eat it as it is good for our health as well. Wherever I am, if I have the choice, I prefer eating rice. As far as I am concerned, eating rice will keep me healthy and strong.
Thank you everyone for reading my awful writing. Please consider correcting it. If you are kind enough to do that, I'll be very grateful to you. Thanks a million.
Hi, Kupuvi. Good job! The term “staple food” is not incorrect, but it is somewhat redundant, as “staple” means the predominant food eaten in a country be it rice, corn, bread, beans, etc. By moving and modifying “makes our health strong” to the end, you now have a concluding statement that sums up everything before it, instead of being somewhat repetitive as in your original. Finally, use a comma instead of a period after “...to do that” to make a full sentence. As always, I hope that this helps you.
November 9, 2020
I grew up eating rice. Rice is the staple food in my country. People here eat rice for
every meal. Without rice, meals are considered incomplete to us. I love to eat rice as it makes us strong. My favourite food to eat is rice. Wherever I go, I prefer
eating rice. As far as I am concerned, rice is good for our health as well. Thank you
everyone for reading my awful writing. Please consider correcting it. If you
would be kind enough to do that, I'll be very grateful to you. Thanks a million.
November 8, 2020
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