In my view, parents have the most responsibilities on child's academic development, because if their house is a mess or child don't have enough support and incentive at home, their performance in scho

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Eduardo Petrini

In my view, parents have the most responsibilities on child's academic development, because if their house is a mess or child don't have enough support and incentive at home, their performance in school most likely woud be affected as well.

Aug 16, 2022 5:57 PM

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In my view, parents have the most influence on a child's academic development. If their house is a mess or their child doesn't have enough support or incentives at home, their performance in school will most likely be affected as well.

August 16, 2022

In my view, parents have the most responsibility in relation to children's academic development. If their house is a mess or their child don't have enough support and incentive at home, their performance in school will most likely be affected.

I like your text! Be careful about your sentence length, sometimes splitting a long sentence into two sentences can work better in English

August 16, 2022

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