The Tim じぁん!!!
It’s sunny today. Recently, Dad brought home this wooden cross, believing it would help MeeMaw more or less. It arrived in a flat carton with scripture printed on it. My cat somehow became obsessed with it and kept lying on it the whole time. Has my cat become holy? He must have sensed something. I know it sounds silly but maybe, just maybe the box is blessed, and animals are able to sense it.
Feb 18, 2025 10:41 AM
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It’s sunny today. Recently, Dad brought home this wooden cross, believing it would help MeeMaw to some degree. It arrived in a flat carton with a scripture printed on it. My cat somehow became obsessed with it and kept lying on it the all the time. Has my cat become holy? He must have sensed something. I know it sounds silly but maybe, just maybe, the box is blessed, and animals are able to sense it.
1) I'd omit "more or less" here... in reading the Wiktionary listing for the phrase, I think it's because "more or less" tends to describe generalities rather than specific instances. 2) added "a" before scripture because it's generally treated as a countable word (though it looks like it wouldn't be!) 3) similar to (1), "the whole time" is typically for one extended period, instead of multiple periods. Good work again!
Feb 18, 2025 8:08 PM
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