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Katty
Hi everyone, I have to write a letter of application for my writing task. I would like you to tell me if I made any mistakes Dear Sir Madam, I am writing to apply for the position of activity instructor which were advertised in the website of the company. I am 22 years old and come from Peru. At present, I am completing my last year at university. I have been studying English at Britanico for three years. One of the main reasons I am applying for the job is to improve my confidence in spoken English. I do not have much experience in this kind of job but I have always been interested in dealing with the public. I consider myself as an active and hard-working person. In addition, I love doing different types of sports in the weekend, such as swimming or tennis. I consider that I am suitable for the job because I have good communication skills and I feel enthusiastic to meet new people. I would be grateful if you could send me further details of the job. After the end of the university, I will be available for interview at any time. Thank you for considering my application. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Katherine
Apr 22, 2021 7:39 AM
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Hi everyone, I have to write a letter of application for my writing task. I would like you to tell me if I made any mistakes Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to apply for the position of activity instructor which you have advertised on your company website. I am 22 years old and come from Peru.At present, I am completing my last year at university. I have been studying English at Britanico for three years. One of the main reasons I am applying for the job is to improve my confidence in spoken English. I do not have much experience in this kind of work but I have always been interested in dealing with the public. I consider myself as an active and hard-working person. In addition, I love doing different types of sports at the weekend, such as swimming or tennis. I consider that I am suitable for the job because I have good communication skills and I feel enthusiastic about meeting new people. I would be grateful if you could send me further details of the job. At the end of my university studies I will be available to interview at a time of your convenience. Thank you for considering my application. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Katherine
April 22, 2021
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Hi everyone, I have to write a letter of application for my writing task. I would like you to tell me if I made any mistakes Dear Sir Madam, I am writing to apply for the position of activity instructor that was advertised on the company website. I am 22 years old and come from Peru. At present, I am completing my last year at university. I have been studying English at Britanico for three years. One of the main reasons I am applying for the job is to improve my confidence in spoken English. I do not have much experience in this kind of work, but I have always been interested in dealing with the public. I consider myself an active and hard-working person. In addition, I love doing different types of sports at the weekend, such as swimming or tennis. I consider that I am suitable for the job because I have good communication skills and I am enthusiastic to meet new people. I would be grateful if you could send me further details of the job. I will be available for interview at any time. Thank you for considering my application. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Katherine
When you say "after the end of University" do you mean "once I have completed my univeristy course", "fromthe end of my current university term" or "Any day after university"? I have made a few corrections, but it was generally well written, well done. Not a language issue, but I would probably not highlight that you do not have experience.
April 22, 2021
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