Johanna
Please correct my mistakes πŸ™πŸ»πŸ™πŸ» μ‹œκ°„μ΄λž€ λΆ€λͺ¨κ°€ μžλ…€μ—κ²Œ 쀄 수 μžˆλŠ” μ„ λ¬Όμ΄μ—μš”. μ €λŠ” 어렸을 λ•Œ 재 λΆ€λͺ¨λ‹˜λ“€μ΄ 맀일 일을 ν–ˆμ—ˆμœΌλ‹ˆκΉŒ, μ œκ°€ λΆ€λͺ¨λ‹˜κ³Ό λ³„λ‘œ μΉœν•˜μ§€ μ•Šμ•˜μ–΄μš”. 저와 ν•¨κ»˜ μ‹œκ°„μ„ λ³΄λƒˆμœΌλ©΄, μš°λ¦¬κ°€ κΈ΄λ°€ν•œ 가쑱이 λ˜μ—ˆμ–΄μš”. ν•˜μ§€λ§Œ 우리 μ—„λ§ˆλž‘ μ•„λΉ κ°€ μ‚¬λž‘ν•œλ‹€κ³  같이 λ¨ΉλŠ” 외식도 쒋은 선물인 κ±° κ°™μ•„μš” πŸ€ͺ
Apr 22, 2021 1:44 PM
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Please correct my mistakes πŸ™πŸ»πŸ™πŸ» μ‹œκ°„μ΄λž€ λΆ€λͺ¨κ°€ μžλ…€μ—κ²Œ 쀄 수 μžˆλŠ” μ„ λ¬Όμ΄μ—μš”. μ €λŠ” 어렸을 λ•Œ λΆ€λͺ¨λ‹˜μ΄ 맀일 일을 ν–ˆμ—ˆμ–΄μ„œ, μ œκ°€ λΆ€λͺ¨λ‹˜κ³Ό λ³„λ‘œ μΉœν•˜μ§€ μ•Šμ•˜μ–΄μš”. 저와 ν•¨κ»˜ μ‹œκ°„μ„ λ³΄λƒˆλ‹€λ©΄, μš°λ¦¬κ°€ κΈ΄λ°€ν•œ 가쑱이 λ˜μ—ˆμ„ κ²ƒμ΄μ˜ˆμš”/됐을텐데. ν•˜μ§€λ§Œ 우리 μ—„λ§ˆλž‘ μ•„λΉ κ°€ μ €μ—κ²Œ μ‚¬λž‘ν•œλ‹€λ©° 같이 λ¨ΉλŠ” 외식도 쒋은 선물인 것 κ°™μ•„μš” πŸ€ͺ
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Filipino (Tagalog), Korean
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Korean
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