Serena
I admire a few people in the world, most of them unknown, but surprising and great. I only admire one famous person. He was a writer. He was an original, creative, critical, committed and recognized artist from Latin America. He was able to describe something as simple as putting on a sweater in an amazing way. I love the way he used to see the world. By the way, his name is Julio Cortázar.
Feb 14, 2021 9:05 PM
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I admire a few people in the world, most of them unknown, but surprising and great. I only admire one famous person. He was a writer. He was an original, creative, critical, committed and recognized artist from Latin America. He was able to describe something as simple as putting on a sweater in an amazing way. I love the way he used to see the world. By the way, his name is Julio Cortázar.
I don't see any grammatical errors. Well done!
February 16, 2021
I admire a few people in the world, most of them unknown, but each one unique and inspiring. I only admire one famous person. He was a writer. He was an original, creative, critical, committed and recognized artist from Latin America. He was able to describe something as simple as putting on a sweater in an amazing way. I love the way he used to see the world. By the way, his name is Julio Cortázar.
No grammatical mistakes, well done! The only thing I would change are the adjectives to describe the people; the ones.you used don't really fit well.
February 14, 2021
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Serena
Language Skills
English, Spanish
Learning Language
English