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Hello everyone.
Today I want to talk about a ceremony.
Next month or rather next year? there are coming of age ceremony, it’s called 成人式 in Japan.
In Japan, the age of twenty is an adult, and drinking and smoking from the same period.
I will have become twenty years old before the day.
Also,I’m live in Yokohama,but there are a lot of people in the city so we divide into six sessions.
I will participate in the last session. In addition, it will be held a big place such as Yokohama Arena.
I’m excited from now ,because we will meet my friends in junior high school.
Sometimes I meet friends in junior high school. However, I only meet with friends I know well.
So I’m looking forward to meeting many people.
I will wear Kimono that the color is red.
It was really difficult for me to choose it. There are variety of colors and patterns so I couldn’t chose it.
After the ceremony, I will participate in alumni meeting in junior high school.
But the party’s entrance fee is very high.
It is 9000 yen for about two hours.
I don’t know what we do,talk?Eat?
Anyway,I can’t wait the ceremony and an alumni meeting.
Dec 9, 2022 12:34 PM
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Hello everyone. Today I want to talk about a ceremony. Next month, or rather next
year, there will be a coming of age ceremony, it’s called 成人式 in Japan. In Japan, 20 year olds are considered adults, and drinking and smoking will now be permitted. I will
have become twenty years old before the day(this sentence is incorrect but I don't understand what you mean). Also, I live in Yokohama, but there
are lots of people in the city so we divide into six sessions. I will
participate in the last session. In addition, it will be held in a big place such
as the Yokohama Arena. I’m excited because we will meet my friends in
junior high school. Sometimes I meet friends in junior high school. However, I
only meet with friends I know well, so I’m looking forward to meeting many
people. I will wear a red - coloured Kimono. It was really difficult for me
to choose it. There is a big variety of colors and patterns so I found it difficult to choose it.
After the ceremony, I will participate in the alumni meeting in junior high school.
But the party’s entrance fee is very high. It is 9000 yen for about two hours. I
don’t know what we'll do... Talk? Eat? Anyway, I can’t wait the ceremony and the alumni
meeting.
Sounds really good! I'd love to go to Japan for these events!
December 9, 2022
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