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I love December 17th because it’s my birthday! I finally turned 20. I want to drink alcohol with my friends and family. I presented to me to go to the Disney Sea with my friend. I looked forward to going there very much and the day was so exciting and happiest birthday ever. Actually, I feel lonely because I can’t spend with my family on my birthday. But my friend said to me let’s go to the Disney Sea. I was very happy to go there with her. She is not old friends, but we get along very well, and I love her. This year, we traveled together many sites. We went to Fukuoka and Busan. I love travel with her because there is no end to our talk. Just being together is so fun. Sometimes we argue, but it will soon be back to normal. We are going to go to Fukuoka again next week. We love there because it’s close to Korea. The reason we are going to Fukuoka is because there is a concert. It’s a last concert of the year. I hope I can go more concert next year. I want to make the best year ever. I’m already looking forward to 2026!
Dec 18, 2025 2:05 PM
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I love December 17th because it’s my birthday! I finally turned 20. I want to drink alcohol with my friends and family. As a special present to myself, I went to the Disney Sea with my friend. I looked forward to going there very much and the day was so exciting and the happiest birthday ever. Actually, I feel lonely if I can’t spend my birthday with my family【★spendは「spend+時間」という使い方をします】. But my friend said to me, "Let’s go to the Disney Sea on your birthday.". I was very happy to go there with her. She is not my old friend, but we got along very well, and I love her. This year, we traveled together to many sites. We went to Fukuoka and Busan.【★Sounds so amazing!!!】 I love traveling with her because there is no end to our talk. Just being together with her is so fun. Sometimes we argue, but we will soon get back to normal. We are going to go to Fukuoka again next week. We love there because it’s close to Korea. Another reason【★一つ前の文で福岡に行く理由をすでに一つ説明しているので、ここはanother reason「もう一つの理由」とした方が自然になります】 we are going to Fukuoka is because there is a concert. It’s the last concert of the year for me. I hope I can go to more concerts【★goの使い方:「go to 名詞」「go 副詞(there, homeなど)」。concertsは副詞ではなく名詞なので、前置詞toが必要です】 next year. I want to make the best year ever. I’m already looking forward to 2026!
It's pretty nice to see you enjoy Fukuoka and Busan!! Hope you will go there again many times and enjoy. I recommend 「はかたや」, which serves incredibly cheap but tasty RAMEN!! Believe it or not, their cheapest RAMEN costs only ¥290!!!!!!! Search Google for 「はかたや」.
December 28, 2025
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