Just yesterday...Because my dad took me to our old house to fetch something that we will use,he hurried there and asked I to carry a lot of things.They are really heavy and it's so far.I was very sad

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Just yesterday...Because my dad took me to our old house to fetch something that we will use,he hurried there and asked I to carry a lot of things.They are really heavy and it's so far.I was very sad,I cried aloud. (I am only 15,so my English is not good.Please don't laugh at me.If I make mistakes,please point them out,thanks)

Feb 5, 2022 9:01 PM

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Just yesterday, because my dad took me to our old house to get something we need to use. He was in a hurry and asked me to carry a lot of things. They were really heavy and it was so far away. I was very sad, and I cried aloud. (I am only 15, so my English is not good. Please don't laugh at me. If I make mistakes, please point them out. Thanks.)

Your English is pretty good! I'm sorry it was sad to go back to your old house.

February 5, 2022

Just yesterday...Because my dad took me to our old house to fetch something that we will use,he hurried there and asked me to carry a lot of things.They were really heavy and it was so far.I was very sad,I cried aloud. (I am only 15,so my English is not good.Please don't laugh at me.If I make mistakes,please point them out,thanks)

February 5, 2022

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