Paloma
The Internet it is a good way to meet people but you have to be alert because also it provides you bad things. But, why more people are engaged to the internet to meet dates? Firstly, the internet is good for shy people, you aren’t face to face, so it is easier to be yourself without complex Secondly, there are too many forum or chats, so the chances to find somebody similar like you are higher than in a disco, or in a street. Lastly, thanks to the internet to drift apart someone dislike you is easier. It seems that all are benefits but not far because for these same reasons it is easier to be can cheated. Can you trust on somebody who never has seen? In conclusion, the internet has pros and drawbacks so have to be conscious and cautious before meet someone.
Oct 29, 2021 4:36 PM
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The Internet is a good way to meet people, but you have to be alert, because it can also bring you bad things. But, why are more people hooked on the internet to meet people? Firstly, the internet is good for shy people, you aren’t face to face, so it is easier to be yourself without complexes. Secondly, there are many forums or chats, so the chances of finding somebody similar to you are higher than in a disco, or in the street. Lastly, thanks to the internet, drifting apart from someone you dislike is easier. It seems that they are all benefits, but far from it, because for these same reasons it is easier to be cheated. Can you trust somebody who you have never seen? In conclusion, the internet has pros and drawbacks (or cons), so you have to be conscious and cautious before meeting someone.
Hola Paloma, not bad. Too many - demasiado. "In the street" - although "the" is very specific, here we are using it as a general place, similar to "I spent my vactions at the beach." DriftING is a general activity. Verbs with before and after have -ing. Keep practicing! Saludos, Simón.
October 29, 2021
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