Hi! Great job with this text! It is very clear and easy to understand. Here are just a few small tips to make it sound even more natural: "I studied for my English test" (We usually say we study for a test or exam) "I'll go to my part-time job" or "I'll work at my part-time job" (Instead of saying 'do a job') "I'll arrive home" (Native speakers usually drop 'at my' and just say 'arrive home' or 'get home') "So, I will just eat dinner tomorrow" or "So, I'll skip dinner tonight" (Using 'will' sounds more like a natural plan than 'can') Keep up the good work! 😊