Today's writing practice: 1) I've been watching my favourite soap opera every day since March 2019 which is 48 minute long as a episode to improve my German. 2) Yesterday, I opened my violin's backpa

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Kaori

Today's writing practice: 1) I've been watching my favourite soap opera every day since March 2019 which is 48 minute long as a episode to improve my German. 2) Yesterday, I opened my violin's backpack to check its condition. 3) I wanted to make sure if It's really possible that the narrow space in my room is enough to play violin, because a fiddlestick is long and is moved when it's played. 4) I have been reading a book about how to play violin of Leopold Mozart who is the father of Wolfgang Amadeus Mozart so that I expand my knowledge how to play Mozart's ornaments. Could you please check my writing? Thanks in advance. 🐰

Sep 23, 2023 5:20 AM

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Today's writing practice: 1) I've been watching my favourite soap opera every day since March 2019 to improve my German. Each episode is 48 minutes long. 2) Yesterday, I opened my violin case to check its condition. 3) I wanted to make sure it was really possible to play violin in my narrow room, since a bow is long and is moved when it's played. 4) I have been reading a book about how to play violin by Leopold Mozart, the father of Wolfgang Amadeus Mozart, to expand my knowledge of how to play Mozart's ornaments. Could you please check my writing? Thanks in advance. 🐰

Sentence 1 is too long - don't try to put all your thoughts into one sentence. Also, your clauses are not in logical order - it sounds like March 2019 is 48 minutes long. 3. Usually we just say 'violin case' no matter what shape it is. 4. 'fiddlesticks' is only used as an old-fashioned exclamation of mild irritation: "He's late again. Fiddlesticks!" Just say 'bow'. Not Bad - corrections are mostly small.

September 24, 2023

Today's writing practice: 1) I've been watching my favorite soap opera every day since March 2019 which is 48 minutes long as an episode to improve my German. 2) Yesterday, I opened my violin backpack to check its condition. 3) I wanted to make sure if the narrow space in my room may be enough to play the violin because a fiddlestick is long and is moved when it's played. 4) I have been reading a book about how to play violin by Leopold Mozart, the father of Wolfgang Amadeus Mozart so that I expand my knowledge of how to play Mozart's ornaments. Could you please check my writing? Thanks in advance. 🐰

September 23, 2023

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