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According to the weather forecast, it should have rained today. Although It rained just a little bit in the morning, it's cloudy now. However, It seems like it's going to rain again. I guess that it will be rain again when I finish to work. Because It always rains when I go out. Oh! It's starting to rain now... My estimation was screwed!
Jul 29, 2021 6:19 AM
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According to the weather forecast, it should have rained today. Although it rained a little in the morning, it's cloudy now. However, It seems like it's going to rain again. I guess that it will be rain again when I finish work. It always rains when I go out. (If you start the sentence with because, it becomes a sentence fragment) Oh! It's starting to rain now... My estimation was messed up! ("messed up" sounds more natural here. "screwed" sounds a little harsh)
July 29, 2021
According to the weather forecast, it should have rained today. Although it rained just a little bit in the morning, it's cloudy now. However, it seems like it's going to rain again. I guess that it will rain again when I finish work, because it always rains when I go out. Oh! It's starting to rain now... My estimation was screwed!
面白い文章です! 日本語で「雨です」っていう言い回しは普通なんですけど、英語では「it will be rain」とか「it is rain」はあまり言わないです。 引き続き頑張ってね
July 29, 2021
According to the weather forecast, it should have rained today. It did rained but just a little bit in the morning, it's cloudy now. However, It seems like it's going to rain again. I guess that it will rain again when I finish my work work. Because It always rains when I go out. Oh! It's starting to rain now... My estimation was screwed!
That is a great essay! And ps: I love rains!
July 29, 2021
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