赵一蔚
Recently I have stopped using social media due to the atmosphere filled with sarcasm and trolls. I don't really understand why people behind the screen suddenly attack each other for no reason and obviously I feel uneasy given the awful experience. I know I could do nothing but focus on myself. So I started to balance my time and do something more valuable like reading. The more I read, the more tranquil I felt. I saw wisdom flowing between the lines. I heard the voice of reason lingering near my ears. I found my peace by reading.
Dec 19, 2022 3:45 PM
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Recently I have stopped using social media due to its atmosphere being filled with sarcasm and trolls. I don't really understand why people behind the screen suddenly attack each other without reason and, obviously, I feel uneasy given these awful experiences. I know I cannot do anything but focus on myself. So, I started to balance my time by doing something more valuable like reading. The more I read, the more tranquil I felt. I saw wisdom flowing between the lines in books. I heard the voice of reason lingering near my ears. I found my peace by reading.
Very good essay. Just be careful about combining your tenses. :-)
December 19, 2022
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