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Hi! Today was a great but tired day. In the morning I woke up, I took a shower, I got dressed and I had my breakfast, then I practiced dance for a soon dance competition. I ate an apple and talked with my mom, she was a little bit angry with me because I arrived late yesterday at home, I tried talking her and I guess that worked it, anyway this was my all day, so that I want to know if you someone of you guys, might to read this text to correct and to continue practice my Writing English…😁✌️thanks u✨
Apr 12, 2022 3:59 AM
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Hi! Today was a great but tiring day. In the morning, I woke up, took a shower, got dressed and had my breakfast. Then, I practiced dance for an upcoming dance competition. I ate an apple and talked with my mom. She was a little bit angry with me because I had arrived home late yesterday. I tried talking to her, and I guess that worked. Anyway, this was my whole day. So, I’d like to know if you some of you guys might read and correct this text. I want to continue practicing my written English…😁✌️Thank you.✨
April 12, 2022
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Hi! Today was a great but tiring day. In the morning I woke up, I took a shower, I got dressed and I had my breakfast, then I practiced dancing for a soon coming dance competition. I ate an apple and talked to my mom, she was a little bit angry with me because I arrived late yesterday at home, I tried talking her and I guess that worked out, anyway this was my day, I want to know if someone can read this text and correct it so that I can continue to practice Writing English…😁✌️thank u✨
April 12, 2022
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