Dear Selina Team， I'm writing to express my interest in the volunteer position to share some experiences in guest hospitality. Are you still accepting volunteers for this June to August period? I'm a

Xin

Dear Selina Team， I'm writing to express my interest in the volunteer position to share some experiences in guest hospitality. Are you still accepting volunteers for this June to August period? I'm also available in winter if you prefer. I was in Thailand during the past Christmas holiday, even though English is not my native language, they still accepted my volunteering. I am currently working at a school (the B). During my internship as a Butler Service Desk Operator (Telephone operator) at The St. Regis, I handled incoming communication, delivered emails, assisted other apartments with client information. I also work for an American telecommunications company, calling operators to make sure lines are working. I have a lot of time available during my school holidays, so I am eager to take on meaningful work related to my passion. Thank you for your consideration. I am looking forward to your reply. Kind regards, X

Jun 13, 2025 7:55 AM

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Dear Selina Team, I am writing to express my interest in the volunteer position to share my experiences in guest hospitality. Are you still accepting volunteers for the June to August period? I am also available in winter if you prefer. I volunteered in Thailand during last Christmas, and although English is not my native language, they still accepted me as a volunteer. I am currently working at a school (the B). During my internship as a Butler Service Desk Operator (Telephone Operator) at The St. Regis, I handled incoming communications, delivered emails, and assisted other departments with client information. I also work for an American telecommunications company, calling operators to ensure lines are working properly. I have a lot of free time during my school holidays and am eager to take on meaningful work related to my passion. Thank you for your consideration. I look forward to your reply. Kind regards, X

Xin, you’ve done a great job in outlining your experience and expressing interest in the volunteer position. The main areas to refine are making your language more concise and professional, improving clarity in certain parts, and ensuring consistency in grammar and punctuation. A few adjustments will help you present a stronger, more polished application. Let me know if you’d like me to help with any revisions or further practice! I’d love to help you improve your writing skills even more. Feel free to reach out anytime.

Jun 16, 2025 4:21 PM

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