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My favorite festival is on the 15th day of the 9th month of the lunar calendar every year -the Moon Festival! When the day comes on,l am always really happy because l can barbecue with a lot of people on this day. The last year's Moon Festival, almost twenty people had a wonderful night. We collaborated at first, some people were responsible for the purchase, others responded for washing vegetables, and others responded for lighting fire. Then we barbecue and chat at the same time and also set off the beautiful fireworks all night. Suddenly, we found we had bought too much food to eat. So our solution was to invite neighbors to join us. Fortunately, those foods were all eaten up. In the end, we cleaned up the trash and finished the happy day.

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Can you help me Correct English essays?Thank
My favorite festival is on the 15th day of the 9th month of the lunar calendar every year -the Moon Festival! When the day comes on,l am always really happy because l can barbecue with a lot of people on this day. The last year's Moon Festival, almost twenty people had a wonderful night. We collaborated at first, some people were responsible for the purchase, others responded for washing vegetables, and others responded for lighting fire. Then we barbecue and chat at the same time and also set off the beautiful fireworks all night. Suddenly, we found we had bought too much food to eat. So our solution was to invite neighbors to join us. Fortunately, those foods were all eaten up. In the end, we cleaned up the trash and finished the happy day.

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My favorite festival is on the 15th day of the 9th month of the lunar calendar every year -the Moon Festival! When the day comes, l am always really happy because I can barbecue with a lot of people on this day. Last year's Moon Festival, almost twenty people had a wonderful night. We collaborated at first, some people were responsible for the purchase, others responded for washing vegetables, and others responded for lighting fire. Then we barbecue and chat at the same time and also set off the beautiful fireworks all night. Suddenly, we found we had bought too much food to eat. So our solution was to invite neighbors to join us. Fortunately, those foods were all eaten up. In the end, we cleaned up the trash and finished the happy day.

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