Hi! I was in Georgia all summer. I swam in the sea and walked on Sundays. My brother and I played Minecraft and other games. In the evening the whole family played on the playground.

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Nataly

Sep 11, 2023 7:26 PM

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Hi! I was in Georgia all summer. I swam in the sea and went for a walk on Sundays. My brother and I played Minecraft and other games. In the evening the whole family played on the playground.

September 11, 2023

Hi! I was in Georgia all summer. I swam in the sea and walked on Sundays. My brother and I played Minecraft and other games. In the evening the whole family played on the playground.

Very good! However, Walked on Sundays - usually we would put a little more information for example 'walked on the beach', 'walked 3 miles'. In the evening - which evening? If you mean every evening you should say 'each evening'... You play 'in' a playground.

September 12, 2023

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