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Yesterday, I went to Tokyo Jarmy to study Islam. It was so much fun! I would like to visit again if I have a chance! Then I went to buy clothes and went to karaoke with my friends. It was a very fulfilling day.
May 24, 2025 5:56 PM
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Yesterday, I went to Tokyo Jarmy to study Islam. It was so much fun! I would like to visit again if I have a chance! Then I went to buy clothes and went to karaoke with my friends. It was a very fulfilling day.
You could change "then" for "afterwards," - but honestly nothing is grammatically incorrect.
May 24, 2025 6:35 PM
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