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今天我去了助动车店。他们有一辆全电助动车品牌。我觉得三月我要买的。三月天气比一月天气更好。我需要买一辆助动车头盔。我还需要获得摩托车执照。
Dec 30, 2020 11:51 PM
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今天我去了助动（我们这边叫电动车）店。店里出了一辆新款电动车。我打算在三月买一辆。三月份的天气适合骑电动车出门，另外我还需要买一个头盔。但在此之前我必须要获得摩托车执照👍。
很棒，表达能明白。我按照比较通顺的说法改了一下，希望没有破坏你要表达的思想😊。又问题可以随时问我，我有skype可以随时交流🤗
December 31, 2020
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今天我去了电动车店。他们有一个全电动车品牌。我打算在三月份买。三月份的天气比一月的天气更好。我需要买一辆电动车头盔。我还需要获得摩托车执照。
December 31, 2020
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今天我去了一家电动车店。他们的品牌是纯电驱动的电动车。我觉得我会在三月买一辆。三月天气比一月天气更好。我还需要买一个电动车头盔。我还需要考一本摩托车驾照。
In mainland, we usually use 电动车 or 电瓶车 to express electromobile。The brand is an uncountable noun so you can't use 一辆 to modify 品牌. 买 is a verb which should be followed by something to be modified. 头盔 is 一个 but not 一辆.
Hi~ Hannah, I've come to help you again ^^
December 31, 2020
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今天我去了助动车店。他们有一辆新的全电助动车。我想在三月份买一辆。三月天气比一月天气更好。此外我需要买一辆助动车头盔。我还需要取得摩托车执照。
December 31, 2020
今天我去电动车店看了一款电动车。我想我可能会在三月份买一辆。三月的天气比一月要好很多。到时，我要去申请一个电动车车牌还得准备一顶头盔。
January 2, 2021
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Hannah
Language Skills
Chinese (Mandarin), English, Korean, Spanish
Learning Language
Chinese (Mandarin), Korean, Spanish
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