Willi Junemann
Hi there! Please correct my email! Date: November 30 From: Willi To: Grace Subject: RE: Do you remember me?! Hi Grace! How wonderful to hear from you! How did you find my email address? Of course I remember you, but I realize it’s nearly seven years now since you were my neighbour. Time flies! You told me quite a lot about your family, so I’d like to know more. And you asked how I am these days, so here’s my news. First things first, Helen and I are now divorced! I know you never liked her Michal you’re probably not too surprised.However, I still see a lot of her of course because the twins go and stay with her every week. They are nine now! They’re lovely girls, but Jessica is a bit of a handful sometimes! And we don’t live in Hamburg any more- we moved because I didn’t want them to grow up in the city. We live in a village called Heist. It’s lovely, and although it’s only ten miles westerly of Hamburg, it’s in the middle of some wonderful countryside. I’m really enjoying village life. We have a huge garden, so I’m growing my own vegetables now. I’m thinking of getting some chickens, but I’m not sure that the neighbours will be happy about that! Come and see us some time! I can even invite you to stay because the house is big, and we have a spare room. However, there’s a lovely pub in the village with rooms, so you also could stay there. Let’s keep in touch. I can’t wait to hear more of your news, so please write soon. Love, Willi
Nov 30, 2020 8:17 PM
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Hi there! Please correct my email! Date: November 30 From: Willi To: Grace Subject: RE: Do you remember me?! Hi Grace! How wonderful to hear from you! How did you find my email address? Of course I remember you, but I realize it’s nearly seven years now since you were my neighbour. Time flies! You told me quite a lot about your family, so I’d like to know more. And you asked how I am these days, so here’s my news. First things first, Helen and I are now divorced! I know you never liked her Michal you’re probably not too surprised.However, I still see a lot of her of course because the twins go and stay with her every week. They are nine now! They’re lovely girls, but Jessica is a bit of a handful sometimes! And we don’t live in Hamburg any more- we moved because I didn’t want them to grow up in the city. We live in a village called Heist. It’s lovely, and although it’s only ten miles west of Hamburg, it’s in the middle of some wonderful countryside. I’m really enjoying village life. We have a huge garden, so I’m growing my own vegetables now. I’m thinking of getting some chickens, but I’m not sure that the neighbours will be happy about that! Come and see us some time! I can even invite you to stay because the house is big, and we have a spare room. However, there’s a lovely pub in the village with rooms, so you also could stay there. Let’s keep in touch. I can’t wait to hear more of your news, so please write soon. Love, Willi
The first person who corrected your email did a wonderful job. I only changed one word period that word was Westerly. That is a good word but it is relatively archaic. West of Hamburg would be a more comfortable way of saying it
December 1, 2020
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Hi there! Please correct my email! Date: November 30 From: Willi To: Grace Subject: RE: Do you remember me?! Hi Grace! How wonderful to hear from you! How did you find my email address? Of course I remember you, but I realize it’s nearly seven years now since you were my neighbour. Time flies! You told me quite a lot about your family, so I’d like to know more. And you asked how I am these days, so here’s my news. First things first, Helen and I are now divorced! I know you never liked Michal ,so you’re probably not too surprised.However, I still see her of course ,because the twins go and stay with her every week. They are nine now! They’re lovely girls, but Jessica is a bit of a handful sometimes! And we don’t live in Hamburg any more- we moved because I didn’t want them to grow up in the city. We live in a village called Heist. It’s lovely, and although it’s only ten miles west of Hamburg, it’s in the middle of some wonderful countryside. I’m really enjoying village life. We have a huge garden, so I’m growing my own vegetables now. I’m thinking of getting some chickens, but I’m not sure that the neighbours will be happy about that! Come and see us some time! I can even invite you to stay because the house is big, and we have a spare room. However, there’s a lovely pub in the village with rooms, so you could also stay there. Let’s keep in touch. I can’t wait to hear more of your news, so please write soon. Love, Willi
November 30, 2020
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