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I left the office with a restless mind, thoughts still unsettled. By the time I got home, my mind, body, and soul were exhausted. But the moment I thought of my cats waiting for me, my mood instantly lifted—because I could finally stroke them!
One of them would roll over, revealing his softest tummy, and as I gently stroked it back and forth, he’d purr loudly in satisfaction. His face would be pure bliss, like he was in heaven. And just like that, my work mode would officially switch off.
I always feel so exhausted after work—my mind is a mess, and my whole body just feels drained. But the moment I think of my cat, I instantly feel better. As soon as I get home, he rolls over and shows me his soft tummy. I start stroking it, and he purrs so loudly, his face completely blissed out, like he’s in heaven. That’s when I know—work mode is officially off.
Feb 12, 2025 12:00 PM
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I left the office with a restless mind, my thoughts still unsettled. By the time I
got home, my mind, body, and soul were exhausted. But the moment I thought of my
cats waiting for me, my mood instantly lifted—because I could finally stroke
them! One of them would roll over, revealing his soft tummy, and as I gently
stroked it back and forth, he’d purr loudly in satisfaction. His face would be
pure bliss, like he was in heaven. And just like that, my work mode would
officially switch off. I always feel so exhausted after work—my mind is a mess,
and my whole body just feels drained. But the moment I think of my cat, I
instantly feel better. As soon as I get home, he rolls over and shows me his
soft tummy. I start stroking it, and he purrs so loudly, his face completely
blissed out, like he’s in heaven. That’s when I know—work mode is officially
off.
Well done. A lovely piece of writing. Very descriptive, nice use of tenses too.
February 12, 2025
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Chinese (Mandarin), English, Japanese, Korean
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