Hello Farhana,
Before I share my opinion, I will clarify that I think the previous observations and suggestions from other helpers are great. And you should consider them, of course.
In my opinion, however, your sentences are perfect IF you intended to play with language. What I mean is, that there is a play with words which I think is interesting. BUT more context is necessary to know if this was your intention. And that is a slightly different topic. I am simply responding to your original question. In short, yes. Your sentences should be considered grammatically correct and natural.