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could you please fix the article if it is wrong grammatically or weird
Do you still keep that day in mind?I failed pass CET4.and as a result,I shed tears in the rain alone.at the same time,you came up to me and subsequently you beat my shoulder,and told me"there exists no destination in life."
Feb 17, 2021 12:51 PM
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could you please fix the article if it is wrong grammatically or weird
Do you still remember that day? I failed to pass CET4 and as a result I shed tears in
the rain alone. At the same time you came up to me and subsequently you beat (beat means hit, a bad thing. Did this person make you feel 舒服? Maybe 'touched' my shoulder) my
shoulder, and told me "there exists no destination in life." (not sure what this means. I would normally say 'and told me not to worry)
Have you just had your result? I hope you can pass CET4 and CET6!
February 17, 2021
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