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"the diagram illustrates how bees produce honey. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant"
The diagram shows the seven stages required of honey production by bees. The process begins with the hive construction and ends with the honey ready for collection and use.
The process first step is the construction of the hive itself. The bees build a hive with small individual cells and, subsequently, go searching for flowers. Upon finding them, they extract the nectar and, back at the hive, they insert it on the cells.
Next, the bees move their wings producing air and, through natural water evaporation, the nectar loses its water content and then turns into honey.
Feb 17, 2021 1:29 PM
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"the diagram illustrates how bees produce honey. Summarise the information by
selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant"
The diagram shows the seven stages required in honey production by bees. The
process begins with the hive construction and ends with the honey ready for
collection and use. The first step in the process is the construction of the hive
itself. The bees build a hive with small individual cells and, subsequently, go
searching for flowers. Upon finding them, they extract the nectar and, back at
the hive, they insert it in the cells. Next, the bees flap their wings to move the
air and, through natural water evaporation, the nectar loses its water content
and then turns into honey.
I suppose this is not all? Seems less than 150 words although I haven't counted. Seems good but I can't check without seeing the diagram.
February 17, 2021
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