Could you correct my text? (This is the question of speaking section, so if you correct my text more naturally, I'm so glad!:->) Q. Some people who unexpectedly receive a large amount of money spend it on practical things, while others spend it for pleasure only. Which do you think is better and why? A.pattern① I think spending large amount of money for their pleasure is better. As I think people should spend it for happiness. Money is the tickets for exchangeing some experience or things. So, if you can feel happiness through spending money for pleasure while your limited life time, I think you should do so. I recommend you to spend it for your experience which makes you grow up. If you feel growing up yourself is pleasure, I think you can spend a large money more effectively. A.pattern② I think spending for practical things is better. Because I think that there are a lot of people who needs some help in the world. For example, water purifier, orphan home, bookmobile and so on. If I have a large money, I want to spend it on needed section. And I think there are some people who need some things in every country, so we firstly should spend it for needed practical things. I think its idea makes a bit better society.